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 Abstract
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-Telemeta is a fully-operational open-source audio web platform dedicated to digital sound archives secure storing, indexing and publishing. 
-The demonstration presents the features of this platform in the context of ethnomusicological research.
-It focuses on the enhance and collaborative user-experience in accessing audio items and their associated metadata and on the possibility for the expert users to further enrich those metadata.
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-Telemeta architecture relies on an external open-source component, TimeSide, that offers audio player integration together with decoding and encoding for most of the audio and video formats through Gstreamer.
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-In order to provide automatic annotation, segmentation and musicological analysis, TimeSide also provides "on-the-fly" audio analysis and additionally wraps several state-of-the-art audio features extraction libraries.
+Telemeta is a fully-operational open-source web audio platform dedicated to digital sound archives secure storing, indexing and publishing. It focuses on the enhance and collaborative user-experience in accessing audio items and their associated metadata and on the possibility for the expert users to further enrich those metadata.
 
+Telemeta architecture relies on TimeSide, an open audio processing framework written in Python which provides a smart embeddable HTML audio player together with decoding, encoding and streaming methods for various formats. TimeSide also includes a set of audio analysis plugins and additionally wraps several state-of-the-art audio features extraction libraries to provide automatic annotation, segmentation and musicological analysis.
 
+The demonstration presents the features of this platform in the context of ethnomusicological research.
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