From 3bd68cd2fc2532780acc4e91a7688ec62205906d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Guillaume Pellerin <yomguy@parisson.com>
Date: Fri, 12 Jun 2015 09:40:46 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] update conclusion

---
 Conferences/2015_FMA/slides_FMA_2015.tex | 43 ++++++++++++------------
 1 file changed, 21 insertions(+), 22 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Conferences/2015_FMA/slides_FMA_2015.tex b/Conferences/2015_FMA/slides_FMA_2015.tex
index 400334b..f7b5788 100644
--- a/Conferences/2015_FMA/slides_FMA_2015.tex
+++ b/Conferences/2015_FMA/slides_FMA_2015.tex
@@ -131,9 +131,9 @@
 
 \begin{block}{Challenges}
    \begin{itemize}
-    \item \alert{Musicologists} need music, metadata and search engines
-    \item \alert{Computer scientists} need music and semantic datasets
-    \item Both communities need to learn from one another to jointly develop tools for \alert{computational ethnomusicology}
+    \item \alert{musicologists} need music, metadata and search engines
+    \item \alert{computer scientists} need music and semantic datasets
+    \item both communities need to learn from one another to jointly develop tools for \alert{computational ethnomusicology}
     \item How do we \alert{grow and scale} data and technologies in a \alert{sustainable way}?
    \end{itemize}
 \end{block}
@@ -172,8 +172,8 @@
   \frametitle{The Telemeta platform}
   \begin{block}{Open audio platform with metadata}
       \begin{itemize}
-      \item \alert{Access, preserve} and \alert{share} sound items
-      \item Enrich associated \alert{metadata} that
+      \item \alert{access, preserve} and \alert{share} sound items
+      \item enrich associated \alert{metadata} that
         contains key information on the context and significance of
         the recording.
       \item Telemeta = music + metadata + web
@@ -215,7 +215,7 @@
 \begin{frame}\frametitle{Metadata}
   \begin{block}{}
     \begin{itemize}
-    \item \alert{Everything} describing the context and the content of a music record
+    \item \alert{Everything} describing the context and the conten of a music record
     \item Valuable informations about the \alert{source of the data} and to the related \alert{work of
         peer researchers}.
     \item \alert{Collaborative editing} of metadata optimizes the continuous process of knowledge gathering
@@ -246,10 +246,10 @@
 
 \begin{block}{Additional materials}
   \begin{itemize}
-  \item Iconographies (digitalized pictures, scans of booklets and
+  \item iconographies (digitalized pictures, scans of booklets and
     field notes, and so on),
-  \item Hyperlinks
-  \item Biographical information about the collector.
+  \item hyperlinks
+  \item biographical information about the collector.
   \end{itemize}
 \end{block}
 
@@ -527,16 +527,16 @@ audio analysis services over the web
 \begin{frame}{Conclusion}
   \begin{block}{}
     \begin{itemize}[<+->]
-    \item Telemeta is a \alert{fully operational} web audio framework
-      for managing digital sound archives
-    \item It's an \alert{open-source} software (-> feel free to use,
-      fork or contribute)
-    \item Through the Sound archives of the CNRS - Musée de l’Homme,
+    \item The Sound archives platform of the CNRS - Musée de l’Homme
       it is now used by many ethnomusicologists around the world for
-      research or education purposes.
-    \item Its collaborative nature enable a \alert{continuous
-        enrichment} of the audio content, the metadata and the
-      analysis tools.
+      research or education purposes
+    \item Telemeta and TimeSide are \alert{fully operational} web audio frameworks
+      for managing digital sound archives in ethnomusicology context
+    \item The collaborative nature of Telemeta enables a \alert{continuous
+        enrichment} of the audio content, the metadata, the
+      analysis tools and results
+    \item It's an \alert{open-source} software: feel free to use,
+      fork or contribute
     \end{itemize}
   \end{block}
 \end{frame}
@@ -557,12 +557,11 @@ audio analysis services over the web
 
 
 \begin{frame}{Conclusion}
-  \begin{block}{Future developments}
-Future developments will turn Telemeta into:
+  \begin{block}{Telemeta: future developments}
     \begin{itemize}
     \item an efficient \alert{annotation platform} (with zoom and segment selection)
     \item an \alert{social and collaborative platform} (user access managment and social stuff)
-    \item an \alert{interdisciplinary} collaborative platform between IT and ethno with the joint develoment of automatic analysis and indexation tools
+    \item an \alert{interdisciplinary} collaborative platform between IT and ethno with the joint development of automatic analysis and indexation tools
     \end{itemize}
   \end{block}
 \end{frame}
@@ -660,7 +659,7 @@ Future developments will turn Telemeta into:
 \only<3>{\framesubtitle{German}}
 \only<4>{\framesubtitle{Chinese}}
 \only<5>{\framesubtitle{Arabic}}
-\only<6>{\framesubtitle{Portuguese}}
+\only<5>{\framesubtitle{Portuguese}}
 
   \begin{center}
     \includegraphics<1>[width=1.1\textwidth]{img/telemeta_english.png}
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